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Very first read, first shot at standup, part 2

This is my very first read of my first stand-up routine. Just practicing and showing it to some friends. Trying to get a feel for how it should be presented, get a good rhythm, etc. I’ve never done this before, and it’s kinda queasy-making. I think with time and practice I could do okay with this material, but I’d like to clean things up and trim the fat. Also need to write better punchlines. Anyway, thanks for checking it out. Feel free to tear me a new asshole! Video Rating: 5/ 5

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